> "It’s got an inspirational slogan: Beauty will save the world. But first, it will piss you off." <-- YESSSS!
> "he kept trying to convey that he was helping me as part of his spiritual practice and therefore couldn’t take money for it, which is absolutely the sort of thing that would happen in the novel itself, well done everybody." <-- yay. that is something I wanted to happen in MY UNIVERSE.
> "she works terrible jobs, making and shedding and making and shedding deciduous friends; and every night, she has these dreams, more constant to her than love or home." <-- This is haunting. and I love (but grieve over) the description "making and shedding and making and shedding deciduous friends."
Sorry, I think I have no help in any of the above categories, just random encouragement. Bless you for the courage in creating this!
> "It’s got an inspirational slogan: Beauty will save the world. But first, it will piss you off." <-- YESSSS!
> "he kept trying to convey that he was helping me as part of his spiritual practice and therefore couldn’t take money for it, which is absolutely the sort of thing that would happen in the novel itself, well done everybody." <-- yay. that is something I wanted to happen in MY UNIVERSE.
> "she works terrible jobs, making and shedding and making and shedding deciduous friends; and every night, she has these dreams, more constant to her than love or home." <-- This is haunting. and I love (but grieve over) the description "making and shedding and making and shedding deciduous friends."
Sorry, I think I have no help in any of the above categories, just random encouragement. Bless you for the courage in creating this!